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How Not To Introduce Your Characters #17

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Contributed by Terotrous of

Terotrous says:

This is a very simple joke. The amount of text
is taller than the actual character. That, and this
gives far too much of the story away. I had to use
my ability to come up with vaguely Japanese-sounding
names that probably mean funny things if you actually
showed them to a Japanese person. However dumb the
presentation is, this sounds like it could actually
be an interesting story. So there is hope for everyone.

mcDuffies says:

But, no point in telling the whole story right at start. Or skipping such huge part of a story. This seems more like recap of previous episodes. Shouldn't use that to avoid drawing something that you don't feel like drawing.

Phalanx says:

With so much of the story already revealed, one wonders what there is left to tell.